Scores and Comments
19.c.ps.101.361
Florida Dance Theatre, Inc.
Application Details |
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Proposal Type | General Program Support - Discipline-Based |
Request Amount |
$42,000
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Total Score | 446.000 |
Average Score | 89.200 |
Panelist Scores
Panelist | Excellence | Impact | Management | Accessibility | Total |
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Andree Dale | 37 | 28 | 19 | 10 | 94 |
Davis Tenaj | 40 | 28 | 20 | 10 | 98 |
Jenkins David | 38 | 18 | 19 | 9 | 84 |
Klein Kathleen | 34 | 25 | 18 | 10 | 87 |
Schnell Adam | 33 | 26 | 17 | 7 | 83 |
Comments |
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Andree Dale - Score: 94.000 | |
good representation of community involvement with letter of support, would like to have seen some marketing material or press articles, more specifics on outreach goals, don't see the goal to increase artistic salaries represented in projected budget, scope of programming well articulated |
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Davis Tenaj - Score: 98.000 | |
{No comments provided.} | |
Jenkins David - Score: 84.000 | |
Strong numbers in terms of impact v. the opportunities for engagement. Could you have given a tangible % in terms of your goals in increasing salaries? Or anything to provide us better context? Same with goals for expansion in programming. More measurable goals all around. Not docking since we were told it was the system, but this application seemed to have far more odd formatting things going on. As if it was all copied and pasted from numerous sources? A very smart partnership with FSC, which I can understand also comes with challenges.
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Klein Kathleen - Score: 87.000 | |
MULTI- COUNTY REACH PROFESSIONAL COMPANY |
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Schnell Adam - Score: 83.000 | |
Please watch your proof reading and grammar usage. Your proposal description contains many sentence fragments and formatting issues. Also, some of your word choices diminish the impact of your fantastic programs. Your partnership with ISO is to be commended. Kudos for finding another arts organization to work with to decrease overhead for both you and them. Also, I do worry about your reliance on tuition revenue over performance revenue or contributed income. Re-do your 504 Self Evaluation. It will get you more points! |