Scores and Comments

19.c.ps.101.417

Application Details
Proposal Type	General Program Support - Discipline-Based
Request Amount	$6,187
Total Score	429.000
Average Score	85.800

Panelist	Excellence	Impact	Management	Accessibility	Total
Andree Dale	32	25	18	10	85
Davis Tenaj	40	27	20	10	97
Jenkins David	33	24	18	9	84
Klein Kathleen	34	25	16	8	83
Schnell Adam	32	24	16	8	80

Comments
Andree Dale - Score: 85.000
video collages don't give a sufficient opportunity to view the choreography, usually a 3 minute unedited segment is the best, very nice brochure reflects a well managed organization, projected budget for 2018 doesn't seem to take into account monies for proposed projects covered by this grant for 2018, still photos carry a dynamic not realized in videos, I feel the energy and passion of this group and their commitment to their community, however their success would be greatly enhanced by reaching out to mentors for critical choreographic input
Davis Tenaj - Score: 97.000
{No comments provided.}
Jenkins David - Score: 84.000
I appreciate the social/civic mission. The basic narrative doesn't really key me in on exactly what the funds will be used for? I would have liked more specific information in Marketing and Promotion. Numbers, reach, etc. Your total reach numbers seem very impressive considering your overall budget. Good luck!
Klein Kathleen - Score: 83.000
One support letter?
Schnell Adam - Score: 80.000
Please be careful with your proof reading and grammar usage. Less than excellent writing diminishes the impact of your proposal. I applaud your efforts at using dance to impact social change. While I understand you are a small organization, I think your program is perfect for more outreach and education initiatives which would garner you more grant and foundational support to help you grow.